Post by pureleaf on Nov 30, 2009 0:58:12 GMT -5
Name: Purepaw
Gender: She-cat
Age: 9 moons
Rank: Warrior apprentice
Description: Purepaw is a gleaming brown tabby with violet-blue eyes. Her eyes are one of the most astonishing things, they are usually violet- blue but when the light hits them a certain way they turn a dark blue. Purepaw has a white underbelly while her coat is a glossy brown and black that is medium length and is very smooth. Her slender frame is delicate looking, but really very strong which gives her the advantage of surprise of her strength ageist another clan that isn't anticipating her strength.
Personality: Purepaw is very calm and nothing fazes her, she is also very efficient to get the job done and incredibly helpful to any cat. When the other apprentices are play-fighting, she sits to the side and watches with an amused expression. She likes to watch the medicine cat and her apprentice gather herbs and occasionally help out when she is needed.
History: Purepaw was born during New leaf at the full moon, with Starclan gazing down at the clans. There were three kits in the litter; Icekit, Moonkit and Purekit. Icekit was the strong on, he was the one who represented everything Purekit wasn't, while his sister, Moonkit was restless and neither cold-hearted nor restless like her brother, she squirmed a bit but was fairly peaceful. When Purekit was born, there was a peacefulness that pervaded though the camp as Purekit entered the world, she was the calmest, and most gentle of them all.
Purekit originally wanted to become a medicine cat apprentice, but when another cat was apprenticed for medicine cat, Purekit felt that she should get the task and went on to do warrior training. She will always feel like she should be in the medicine den, but does not hold anything against the current apprentice.
When the clan leader spoke the words to change her and her litter mates into apprentices, they all sat with a different emotion. Icekit was as his usual, icy and cold with a penetrating gaze that only looked at their leader, Moonkit who was squirming with excitement and she, Purekit who sat gazing calmly around the clearing, waiting. When they all received the name "paw" Icepaw looked ambitious he was already staring at their leader with a certain hunger in his eyes.
Though seasons had passed since that and her brother had died when a fox was found and him next to the dead fox dying, and pleading for a quick death. Purepaw had watched her brother die and the dark light leave is ice cold eyes. She was certain that her brother had not gone to Starclan, but a darker place. Purepaw would always remember her brother and that look in his eyes, and shudder relived that her brother would never come to take the leading position unfairly.
Codeword: Mystic
--
Pureleaf
I hope you enjoy this, I would like some comments on the writing though...
Gender: She-cat
Age: 9 moons
Rank: Warrior apprentice
Description: Purepaw is a gleaming brown tabby with violet-blue eyes. Her eyes are one of the most astonishing things, they are usually violet- blue but when the light hits them a certain way they turn a dark blue. Purepaw has a white underbelly while her coat is a glossy brown and black that is medium length and is very smooth. Her slender frame is delicate looking, but really very strong which gives her the advantage of surprise of her strength ageist another clan that isn't anticipating her strength.
Personality: Purepaw is very calm and nothing fazes her, she is also very efficient to get the job done and incredibly helpful to any cat. When the other apprentices are play-fighting, she sits to the side and watches with an amused expression. She likes to watch the medicine cat and her apprentice gather herbs and occasionally help out when she is needed.
History: Purepaw was born during New leaf at the full moon, with Starclan gazing down at the clans. There were three kits in the litter; Icekit, Moonkit and Purekit. Icekit was the strong on, he was the one who represented everything Purekit wasn't, while his sister, Moonkit was restless and neither cold-hearted nor restless like her brother, she squirmed a bit but was fairly peaceful. When Purekit was born, there was a peacefulness that pervaded though the camp as Purekit entered the world, she was the calmest, and most gentle of them all.
Purekit originally wanted to become a medicine cat apprentice, but when another cat was apprenticed for medicine cat, Purekit felt that she should get the task and went on to do warrior training. She will always feel like she should be in the medicine den, but does not hold anything against the current apprentice.
When the clan leader spoke the words to change her and her litter mates into apprentices, they all sat with a different emotion. Icekit was as his usual, icy and cold with a penetrating gaze that only looked at their leader, Moonkit who was squirming with excitement and she, Purekit who sat gazing calmly around the clearing, waiting. When they all received the name "paw" Icepaw looked ambitious he was already staring at their leader with a certain hunger in his eyes.
Though seasons had passed since that and her brother had died when a fox was found and him next to the dead fox dying, and pleading for a quick death. Purepaw had watched her brother die and the dark light leave is ice cold eyes. She was certain that her brother had not gone to Starclan, but a darker place. Purepaw would always remember her brother and that look in his eyes, and shudder relived that her brother would never come to take the leading position unfairly.
Codeword: Mystic
--
Pureleaf
I hope you enjoy this, I would like some comments on the writing though...
